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noa masters

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just me,but in a nice manga pic
actually it's my oc me so not really me but a better me and uhhhh how to explain
just look up mah comics :)
as for the name : my real name is "astrid de meester",my oc's name is noa and "de meester" is dutch for the master so i made it masters
hope you like ^-^
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:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Self portraits are always interesting to see how an artist sees themselves.

Right then when it comes to drawing hair each strand should be drawn individually this was it'll have more life and lift, I've noticed that you've the eyes really well, but eyes are rounded not flat also try adding more depth to them this way they'll have a bit more realism.

Your facial proportions need a bit more work on them, if you're having trouble with this don't be afraid to do a bit of research on it and maybe do some quick studies to help you understand facial structures. Your picture also needs a light source here there isn't one and that really doesn't do it any justice. Light sources are hard to get right but it'll be worth it if you just gave it a try you won't get right the first time round but if you keep on practicing at it you'll get there eventually.

I hope this Critique helps <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h…" width="38" height="15" alt=":hug:" title="Hug"/>